zag's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Yuri Nuri Dollmaker]

as has already been stated, the screen sadly doesn't stretch far enough.
that having been said, this is one of the cutest dollmakers I've come across other than the Candybar dollmaker.

the fact that this has any association at all with the elouai website certainly helps.

[Battle Royale Quiz v1.3]

This isn't a bad quiz at all, though it does have some problems.
first of all, you phrased some of the questions very oddly... but based on the Author Comments, I see that English is most likely not your first language.
Also, once you finish the quiz, you should give the option to restart it without having to refresh the page. the coding for a button to bring you back to frame one is incredibly simple, so there's no excuse for that. Also, at the end, it would be nice if you, as the quiz-maker were to give us the percentage of the answers we got right.

if you were to do all of that, you'd significantly improve your game.

[Hungry Gamers]

best April Fools ever <3

[dys4ia]

Being trans myself, I can understand a lot of what you went through. The road to successfully living as oneself is tough to begin with, but throw gender dysphoria into the mix and things become so much more complicated.
but I digress. the issue at hand is your game, not my past experiences.
overall, I quite enjoyed your game. however, for some reason, the sizing is entirely wrong. it zooms in to the point where I can't see the whole screen, and I can't seem to fix this (I did attempt to right click and zoom out, though nothing happened)

despite that, the game wasn't unplayable. I did feel as though I may have missed some things being unable to read all of the text though.

[Simple RPG]

a quite shallow game, but you figured out variables, and that's more than I've been able to do.
however, if you added more of a story and a save feature, this could become more of a game and less of a test. under the presumption that you intend to do that at all, I'll look forward to seeing the finished product.

seabere responds:

Yeah, getting them to be global was a real hassle (I use AS3 so I can't simply do _Global var) and this was basically just me showing off that I could use them. And yeah my next game will be much better and polished. Oh and I could teach you if you want :D

[Pokemon Interactive]

obviously, there's not an awful lot here right now, which is why I'm rating it so low.
however, I do really like the art and based on what you turn this into, I think it has a lot of potential to be something great. sadly, there's not too much else to criticize, because there's not too much to the eye.

hope to see some real product soon. I'll be keeping on eye on the project.

[flashforbeginners:script]

one of the best tutorials I've seen on Newgrounds.
the majority manage to either bore or confuse me.
you manage to get to the point without completely stepping over major details.
for that, I'm thankful.

[[KK] :# The Game]

absolute brilliance.
those graphics are so vivid... and the game play is just complex enough to keep you playing for hours, but not so complicated that it alienates new players.

...or whatever.

[My Little Dashie - Alpha]

while this game does have potential, it has some definite problems. first of all, I know that the title is "My Little Dashie," but I feel as though you would add a degree of depth if you allow the player to choose which pony they want to play with.
furthermore, right now, I feel as though the battles are too difficult. I can't even get past Twilight Sparkles. a hit/miss ratio would make solve that problem a bit. it would also be nice if the white screen that the pony walked along had more detail... and if there were very small battles to be had there so that you could build experience before you have your first real (and seemingly impossible) battle. if that features is part of the white screen, I apologize. I walked around for a while and saw nothing.

anyway, in time, I do hope to see this game improve.
it could be something truly great.

sonicmon1 responds:

Dear Zag,

Thank you for your critique.

You would not believe how many people request to choose their own pony. I will work on it as a side project once the engine has been finalized and polished. However, this is a tribute to the popular fanfic, which features an owner finding a little Dashie in a cardboard box. It wouldn't make sense if you could choose the pony.

Fear not, though. The Mane 6 will feature in this game. Don't worry.

This all depends on what class you chose. I gave a brief guide on how to win battles in the description. I'm sorry if it was not adequate. I recommend Defender for new players to reduce the opponents attack (Growl) and then reduce the Defence (Stare) before finally going in for the kill.

The white screen aspect will be removed in the next update. This game is getting constant attention from me, so, hopefully, the updates will be frequent. The screen will go. I am hoping to replace it with just the Old Diary. Dashie will instead walk around the Preloader menu and nowhere else.

You will see this game improve. It will take time, but it will get there. Thank you for your guidance.

Your's Awesomely,

SonicMon

[Candy Balance]

a simple game that manages to keep my interest, level after level.
it's fairly well made and has just enough complexity to up the challenge as you surpass each round.